That Plot Problem

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Notes for a story: Gay couple on holiday decide to instigate a threesome. Think somewhere tropical. There is a miscommunication, a confusion about roles.

Hotel rooms in Borneo have signs banning the consumption of durians indoors. This is due to the smell.  Their flesh is an oozing pale yellow, the colour of custard or a smoker’s cum.